The Healer – LoseKorntrol

I really love reading your stories, but I like them better when they have writings with them. Also, the “10 AM” series, is really good but I think you rushed it. I feel you should of had her come back to the abandoned building a few times, also. Like have her do more with the guys there & instead of her fucking the black cock right away, should of had her swallow his cum. Then the next time let her fuck them between the wall. Come back again & fuck them face to face but without them seeing her the first time & she can do whatever she wants with the. Then have her come back 1 last time where she gets fucked by them & how they want to fuck her, cause then I feel she would of been more receptive of being fucked in her own house. Plus, have her wait a day inbetween the visits to the abandoned warehouse & get gifts with toys to use on the days she don’t go to the abandoned building. Also, just curious will we know who the mystery person is? I think it might be her son or his friend Ivan, cause it don’t make sense on who else would know how long its been since she last got fucked & it don’t say if she talks to anyone about it either. Her Husband don’t seem like someone who would talk about that. These were just suggestions on how I think the series would be better. I was just surprised on it being rushed. Just giving my opinion & not criticizing, just was hoping to see that happen with the story. Also, in “The Masseur” series, could there be a prelude or side story of the Old Man doing the massage to Rita’s Aunt. Just feels weird to mention her & not get to see what happened to her & really hoping the Rita gets involved & possible bring Farah’s Mother & Sister into it too or whoever is n the Family Portrait of the Women above the Couch. Just suggestion, not sure how you gonna go with it.